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May ‘25 newsletter

Here’s what I’ve been working on since Jacksboro Highway was released in April.

1. Colin the superhero is coming along nicely. About 50,000 words or half a novel. No idea for a title, but I’ll have to devote some time to the question soon. I’m intending Colin to become a series, so maybe a recurring word or phrase in the title might be useful. ‘Reluctant superhero’ could lead on to ‘Overconfident superhero’. ‘Apprentice superhero’ leads on to ‘Journeyman superhero.’ Then there’s ‘Genesis of a superhero’ which has plenty of possibilities.

If you have ever dreamed or daydreamed how you would mend our country — if only you woke up one day with amazing superpowers — then Colin will be your cup of tea.

Remember, you can read Chapters 1 & 2 here. Feel free to reply with comments, suggestions, likes, dislikes. If becoming a beta reader appeals to you, or being the first to receive chapters in progress, I’d welcome that.

2. A collection of half a dozen unfinished stories have been demanding I finish them. They’ll appear in my next short story collection – possible titles ‘Brave New World’, ‘How to rebuild a country’, ‘New direction’, ‘Shall we try this again?’, ‘Stories from a better world’, ‘The first turn after the corner’.

I’ll tell you about two of them today.

In the series of emails I send out to every new subscriber, I mention the themes I explore intentionally and unintentionally in my stories, including true manhood and masculinity, true leadership, honour and integrity.

As I see our country draw ever closer to being flushed away down the toilet, I anticipate that — come the rebuild — these discarded values will become more and more essential.

A couple of days ago I spent the whole day on a long, short story I’ve been working on and off with for years. All those themes are high in the mix. It’s set in New Zealand after the collapse. Our protagonist, a Maori man-boy called Tane, spent years as a gang prospect, hoping one day he’d be patched. The end of the world happened and there was no rebuild. Instead, survivors returned to farming and simple manufacturing. Ferals scrape a living by raiding these farms and communities. Except the one which Tane ends up living on, by a stroke of luck, as a prospect. Tai Tapu is a well organised, successful farm, tightly regulated and protected by a rigidly hierarchical military leadership. Warriors are in charge and they don’t dish out membership like confetti. Rather like a biker gang. And at the same time, nothing like one.

After failing more trials than he passes, Tane is assigned as a shepherd on a high hill pasture. All alone for months. Nothing to do but watch the sheep — and think.

Have you ever watched the underrated gem ‘The Wrestler’ by Darren Aronofsky (Black Swan, The Whale) starring a spellbinding Mickey Rourke? It gives generously every time I re-watch it. What gripped me last time was the utterly bare, mercilessly transactional world that Ram (Rourke) and Cassidy (Marisa Tomei) live in. They have two identities, a performer and a real-life, day to day person (who is almost invisible by contrast). Their performer identities are valued and sought after, the real person they are is not. At all. Hence, the ‘fake’ persona keeps pulling them back, but time is a one way street and one day soon they will have to reconcile with the real world. Or will they? 

Anyway, Cassidy’s character and dilemma, but even more so the transactional world she lives in, is what inspired my short story ‘Anjelica’. She self-identifies as a high-class call girl, clicks that those days are (almost) over and plans to get out by landing a wealthy husband. She expects the husband will be a dupe, a true believer in love, trust, genuine complementary relationships and so on but after a lifetime of charging for love, she finds she cannot recalibrate. Can anyone?

The transactional world, which we see idolised and promoted everywhere ... by rappers, Kardashians, crime and gangster dramas and films is a good example of all that glitters. It offers golden riches, satisfaction of your every desire, fame, status, exclusive gated mansions proles can only dream of but it’s really a cheap and shiny counterfeit world when compared to – well, family, love, sacrifice, selflessness, brotherhood, truth and beauty – to name but a few.

Happy reading

Martin

January 2025

New Zealand cricket trip.

My trip back to NZ was great. England won the two Tests I watched. Both were sold out crowds. I saw a hat-trick from Gus Atkinson at the Wellington Test and how many cricket fans can say that? Old friendships were renewed and more than a gallon or two of real ale was consumed. Before the cricket I stayed with an old friend in the North Island and got in some hiking.

How long until Jacksboro Highway?

Jacksboro Highway is back from the editors and I've polished off the first round of alterations/improvements. A few other ideas occurred to me which I'm working on. Then I'll put it down for a week, let it brew and come back to it. Here's a reminder of the cover. I can't wait to release it to you. 

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In fact, I’m so keen that I’m releasing Chapters 1 & 2 to you right now. You can read them on the website and whet your appetite. Here.

November 2024 newsletter and updates

What I’ve been reading

I won’t bore you with a list, only highlights that one day I may write reviews for and put up on the website. John D McDonald (famous for Cape Fear and Travis McGee) about whom someone said without whom there would have been no Elmore Leonard and therefore no Quentin Tarantino, wrote a detective series with a richly written protagonist, a ‘knight in tarnished armour’, Travis McGee.

I’m working through the series again, thirty years on. Highly recommended. George Pelecanos pays tribute to McDonald and McGee in ‘The man who came uptown’ by featuring the first book, ‘The Long Blue Goodbye’ in a prison reading class and having the prisoners give their takes on it. Two of the three protagonists are in the room.

Two Steven King’s. ‘The Institute’ and ‘The Outsider’. How does he do it so effortlessly? I have a few ideas for plots and themes that come close to his in their scale and some great characters but how on earth can I approach what he does with his?

Still working through Chekhov’s long collection of short stories. So many of these will be read over again and again to squeeze out more juice. George Saunders (English Lit Prof, novelist and one of the best contemporary short story writers) features three of Chekhov’s stories in his analysis of seven 19th C Russian short stories ‘A swim in a pond in the rain’. Other authors include Tolstoy, Gogol and Turgenev. I may have made it sound dull and dry but it’s the opposite.

What I’ve been writing

In September’s newsletter I introduced you to my latest hero. Tagline - ‘Colin Cowsbotham: Tech Nerd. Virgin. Superhero.’

Colin is about 32K words right now. I anticipate he’ll end up a full length novel. I thought I could attach the first chapter but it’s not quite polished enough. Should be alright for the next newsletter.

More completed short stories and more in work. I know, I only just published ‘As the clever hopes expire’. Most of these are medium-long stories, some at editing stage, some merely skeletons. Not many are post-collapse this time and some straddle the sci-fi and fantasy genres. Working titles – ‘Sigurd and the real girl,’ ‘Hawksbill Five - O - Eight’, ‘Princesses in the new world’. I probably won’t complete a book’s worth before Colin but I won’t be far behind.

What’s coming next?

Jacksboro Highway is still at the editors. But I’m off to New Zealand for a month – to watch two out of three Test matches – so I won’t be able to make any changes, format and publish until after New Year. I intend to send you another newsletter in between, including Colin’s first chapter.

Happy reading, Martin

My latest projects May 2024

1. Novel No 4, a fantasy story, ‘Iraa and the five stories’ and my first collection of short stories ‘And its fall was great’ are both published. Available through Amazon and Kobo.

2. Next novel, working title ‘Jacksboro Highway’, after the John Mayall song, explores the theme of sheep, wolves and sheepdogs. Imagine Wolf Larsen, one of the most dangerous villains in literature, survives the collapse. What would he do then? Change his ways and his nature? Work peacefully and co-operatively as part of a survivor community? Of course not. Larsen would carry on exactly as before, the apex predator feared by his powerless prey. A wolf in the sheepfold. Can anyone oppose and defeat him before every sheep is killed and eaten? That’s the role of the sheepdog, essential for any successful civilisation to survive and prosper. Rough men, prepared to do violence on behalf of the peaceful citizens, who can’t do it for themselves.

But in that pre-collapse England it was open season on sheepdogs. Armed police, British troops serving overseas, prison officers – all cancelled, prosecuted, imprisoned until they became an endangered species.

The wolves, however, ate it up. Thrived and prospered. But that‘s another story.

3. Two other projects – Novel ‘The sleep of ages break’ and screenplay ‘Borderline Brat camp’ remain on the backburner.

Happy reading

Martin

My latest projects Aug 2022

1. My first book of short stories with the working title 'And its fall was great.' Or it could be another quote like 'The lights must never go out' or 'As the clever hopes expire'. The theme I'm aiming for is difficult to summarise in one sentence but includes the complacent, lazy, almost entitled view, (except entitlement takes more mental effort to achieve than this idle, unexamined zephyr of an idea) that everything Britons have that's great, dropped effortlessly out of the sky into our laps and no matter how careless and slack handed we are with them, they could never, ever be lost or broken beyond repair. 

I've used the post-collapse landscape in about half of them, it’s such a generous canvas with huge potential for exploring alternative ways of living, how the collapse unfolded (consider The Scarlet Plague to The Stand to Z for Zachariah), how people addicted to their index linked lives might cope (or not) when everything flies away. I've set one in present day mental health services where staff are handcuffed by some politicians' latest genius wheeze. Another's set in a football stadium with an AI ref a few years from now. Yet another is at an Inquiry into a Tube station fire where some political players are desperate that the truth doesn't come out. Quite a few are set in and around mental hospitals or community teams. One is titled 'Borderline building,' another 'Munchausen's mother.'  I have enough ideas for a gross of short stories, many are 'in work' and enough are within sight of the finish line for me to whet your appetite that it will indeed be released soon, before projects two and three.

2. Second project is the fourth novel, set just a few years in the future, right at the point when the last and irreversible financial collapse occurs, offering, possibly, a choice for some - some villages and towns, some groups, even some countries - to reset their economies, their values, their whole societies to a place where all the people, not just the 000.1% and their political and legal fixers, are looked after, thrive and prosper That is unless the super-rich, aided by their corporations, governments, shysters, licenced gangsters and triggermen grab it all back again first. This story will be on a huge canvas, double the length of a novel, set in a dozen and more countries. The scope of Stephen King's 'Under the Dome' and 'The Stand' with their multiple locations and large cast inspired me to expand my own horizon.

Wealth inequality has stabilised to a point where there are a hundred multinational 'Blue Whales', individuals as rich and richer than countries while the rest of the world have job security, basic public services but nothing else and no hope of ever gaining more. Most don’t even recognise they are no more than the Blue Whales’ slaves.

3. The third project has rather stalled, I don't know where to take it, since UK agents have inexplicably shown such indifference to my first three novels. It's a screenplay for a TV series, set in a Northern NHS psychiatric service, a few years from now, after, yes, the final and irreversible financial collapse, when all the fake money dries up along with the layers of management, auditors, bean counters, E&D officers and anyone who doesn't provide direct care, i.e. back to the seventies.

Borderlines, now there's no money to pay their rescuers, ambulance chasers, professional absolvers, DBT therapists and on and on ad nauseam find themselves not only at the bottom of the pile again but with a maxed out and cancelled ‘get out of jail free’ card. Our hero is an older psych nurse who, in the spirit of 'the school of hard knocks' leads them into the hills on 'Borderline Boot Camp'. The first episode is complete and the second half-way. 

When I get organised, I'll probably send it off to TV agents. Or turn it into a novel. 

À bientôt everybody,

Martin

August 2025 newsletter

Good morning reader,

Here’s what I’ve been working on since Jacksboro Highway was released in April.

1. First draft of Colin the superhero is complete. I’m editing draft two right now. It’s ended up a shorter length novel, somewhere between ‘A Wizard of Earthsea’ and ‘Treasure Island’. The title will probably remain ‘Apprentice superhero’ but … hmm. I’m toying with cover art. One image is a nerdish young man in superhero pyjamas looking in his bedroom mirror seeing the real thing looking back at him. I’m thinking about putting draft covers up on the website for comments when I’ve finished a few I’m happy with. In the meantime, what do you think?

The tagline and or blurb could be built around this – ‘If you have ever dreamed or daydreamed how you would mend our country — if only you woke up one day with amazing superpowers — then Colin will be your cup of tea.’

Remember, you can read Chapter One here. Feel free to reply with comments, suggestions, likes, dislikes. If becoming a beta reader appeals to you, or being the first to receive chapters in progress, I’d welcome that.

2. YouTube channel.

I’ve started an audiobook YouTube channel at https://www.youtube.com/@MartinDeakinsBooks where I’m reading my own stories. About a quarter of ‘The start of the world’ is up and a handful of short stories from the two published collections. I think (?) I’ve just managed to pass Google’s test to upload videos over 15min. If so you’ll be able to listen to a whole story, maybe a whole book in the car or in bed.

3. In my last email I told you progress with my collection of unfinished short stories. Anjelica and Sweet Baby James (Tane the Maori gang prospect) are in final edit stage.

I’ll tell you about two different stories today, Satellite Town & Hawksbill Five – 0 – Eight.

Hawksbill Five – 0 – Eight’s title is a reference to Robert Silverberg’s seminal ‘Hawksbill Station’ where a totalitarian government of the future has sent political prisoners back in time to a prison camp in the Cambrian.

In my story, the most dangerous and irredeemable criminals, mafia, dictators and so on are imprisoned for life, in mysterious high-secure ++ units housing one hundred each, given the basics but nothing more. No guards. No rules, hierarchy or organisation except what each one hundred decides on. Can criminals really change their ways if there’s enough pressure forcing them? Or will they all slaughter each other until there are just a few tribes left, all preying on each other? The Liberal BBC and Guardian positions (i.e. they are poor dears, forced to be that way by society, deprivation, discrimination etc and deserve understanding not judgement or punishment, because punishment ‘doesn’t work’) has been forced into our prisons, police forces, mental hospitals, children’s homes. But it was never tested against the alternative approaches.

Satellite Town is set a few years from now. Smaller cities and towns have seceded from national government. Eventually the growth and cost of the ever expanding parasite population prompted scores of rebellions by the non-parasites who had to pay for it all and declarations of independence across the country. Nottingham (three cheers) is one of those successes. Our hero has escaped a Leicestershire village and got a job as a delivery driver’s loadie. One of their stops is the satellite estate where Nottingham dumped all its neighbours from hell, criminals, addicts and wasters.

Trouble is, I had anticipated a theme for my next short story collection – possible titles ‘Brave New World’, ‘How to rebuild a country’, ‘New direction’, ‘Shall we try this again?’, ‘Stories from a better world’, ‘The first turn after the corner’. You’ll no doubt spot that the two stories above do fit into the theme of doing it better next time and so does ‘Sweet Baby James’ but ‘Angelica’ doesn’t.

It wouldn’t surprise me if the next short story collection becomes publishable at the same time as Colin. But I’ll cross that bridge if and when.

Finally, could you do me a whopping favour? Leave an honest review for any book you’ve read. Here are links to make it easier. Thanks.

My latest projects August 2024

Within sight of the finish line are ‘Jacksboro Highway’ and ‘As the clever hopes expire.’

‘As the clever hopes expire’

My next short story collection has been 7/8 finished for ages. I put it aside because I was enjoying writing ‘Iraa and the five stories’ so much. By the time I launched Iraa I’d become excited about Jacksboro Highway and got stuck in to it. The only holdups for ‘clever hopes’ is editing the last two stories and deciding on cover art. And the blurb.

The title is a line from W.H. Auden’s poem ‘September 1st 1939’

The artwork for my first collection was a lot easier. ‘And its fall was great’ is the final sentence from Jesus’ parable about the man who built his house on sand. So the tide coming in to wash away the sandcastle illustrated it perfectly.

As I’ve suggested in previous newsletters, my main theme concerns what happens when spoiled, unthinking agitators and influencers, (SJWs, social media and MSM commentators) tinker with the foundations of our civilisation, armed with power they didn’t gain on merit, without the foggiest idea of the consequences, positive reinforcement provided by the addictive warm glow of showing how much more righteous they are than those (select enemy’s category here – choose from swivel-eyed, tin foil hat, closet racists and fruitcakes, antivaxxers, little Englanders, outdated reactionary conspiracy theory peddlers, Nazi fascists ad infinitum) and protected from the need to check, test or go slowly because their echo chamber tells them they couldn’t possibly have got anything wrong. What others might call arrogance, stupidity and extreme myopia.

You can see why I’m stuck on the artwork.

Jacksboro Highway

Next novel, working title ‘Jacksboro Highway’, after the John Mayall song, explores the theme of sheep, wolves and sheepdogs. Imagine Wolf Larsen, one of the most dangerous villains in literature, survives the collapse. What would he do then? Change his ways and his nature? Work peacefully and co-operatively as part of a survivor community? Of course not. Larsen would carry on exactly as before, the apex predator feared by his powerless prey. A wolf in the sheepfold. Can anyone oppose and defeat him before every sheep is killed and eaten? That’s the role of the sheepdog, essential for any successful civilisation to survive and prosper. Rough men, prepared to do violence on behalf of the peaceful citizens, who can’t do it for themselves.  

Except in pre-collapse England those sheepdogs had their claws and teeth pulled, were tamed, gentrified and civilised. Or punished until they gave up being sheepdogs. The wolves, however, thrived and prospered.  

I’m at the editing stage. Jacksboro Highway is going to finish as a long novella. I have some mental images for the cover. And a map which I’ll make downloadable from the website - when I work out how to.

 

Two other projects – Epic length novel ‘The sleep of ages break’ and screenplay ‘Borderline Brat camp’ remain on the backburner.

In the meantime, I hope you'll try something you haven't read yet.

Happy reading

Martin

My latest projects Jan 2024

In my last newsletter I was close to completing my first collection of short stories, working title ‘And its fall was great.’ I was also well on the way with what I thought would be novel No 4, working title ‘The sleep of ages break.’

1. ‘And its fall was great’ is now complete. 17 stories, that have inexplicably failed to set agents’ desktops alight. The longest 16,000, the shortest 200 words. Here’s the pitch which will have to convert to a blurb soon.

Here are a few teasers. In present day psychiatric services, staff are handcuffed by some politicians' latest genius wheeze. In a football stadium with an AI ref a few years from now. A ‘Lost World’ post collapse valley where a handful of men travel between farms operated by women. Quite a few are set in and around mental hospitals or community teams. One is titled 'Borderline building,' another ‘Munchausen’s mother.’ ‘An unexamined life’ forces a retired psychiatric nurse manager to re-examine her rose-coloured memories of her career. In New Zealand two tribes have found a way to co-exist peacefully until a former neoliberal businessman arrives. Initiation Day for teenage boys in a warrior led village is not what it looks like. A successful post-collapse farm is invaded by professional criminals straight from the pages of modern crime. In these stories, survivors and leaders are forced to ask; how do we deal with free riders, rebels, criminals and entitlement, how do we defend ourselves or unite groups of people so diverse they’d never ordinarily even meet, when the structures and services that once did it for us have vanished? I.e. how might real equality and diversity, real justice, real unity be achieved (or not) when the imposed, top down, written as policy and enforced as law versions, have gone?

Appearing soon on the website and Amazon.

2. ‘The sleep of ages break’ is on the backburner because of 3

3. The fourth novel, fantasy genre, working title ‘The power of a story’ took on a life of its own. It is complete but going through some re-editing after a professional editor cast her eye over it. Here’s the blurb.

When armies from the Five Kingdoms of Arcadia surrounding the small city state of Berith arrive on the crater rim above, only Iraa, the city’s elderly and disillusioned Wise Woman is aware. She quickly takes action to secure a five day pause.

That was the easy part.

The city has been deliberately and invisibly riven into irretrievably opposed factions who can barely hold back from violence, let alone cooperate.

Iraa entertains no hope that she’ll unite those who’ve remained uncorrupted. Yet that’s the only way to placate the angry, vengeful armies above. She knows she’ll fail, perhaps even before the truce runs out. No-one could do it. Bringing the Straight forces together? Revealing the villains? Satisfying the armies’ demands for justice? In five days? While remaining true to her Order’s code? Five hundred would be pushing it. But she’ll be damned if she doesn’t fail with her Order’s honour and integrity intact.

4. The third project, the screenplay ‘Borderline Brat camp’ remains stalled. The pilot episode is complete. The few agents who take screenplays have been underwhelmed. You can read the premise in Dispatches I which is on the website. 

If it doesn’t get picked up as a screenplay I expect I’ll turn it into a novel. 

À bientôt everybody,

Martin